Greatly enjoyed the 'prison' scene.
Deprived sociopath-lifers with nothing to lose suddenly alone with a 'clueless' pretty girl.
Its a good setup and I'd encourage it to be revisited.
I think it could be varied and expanded to keep it fresh.
e.g an exercise 'yard' - but undercover - at The Lowlife Maximum Security Correntional Facility
The inmates are so dangerous that they never get out to see the sun.
The girl is a human rights campaigner.
She is making a lot of fuss about these poor inmates being treated worse than abbatoir beef.
So after much aggravation from her - the Prison Warden shrugs and makes her sign a paper indicating that she accepts the risks.
'OK you can visit these leeches for your Mickey Mouse survey.
Be sure to let me know what their needs are.
I'll be all ears! (he sniggers at his own joke)
I'll be happy to consider whatever they feel would make their life less harsh.'
She finds out.
Does it change her mind?
Or does it become a crusade to make human beings from these caged beasts.
She visits again - 6 weeks later after her body has healed.
This time she gains the prisoners respect.
But of course respect does not stop their broiling urges.
Already once rehearsed - the second time is worse.
A couple of prison guards are watching the 'entertainment' for their own pleasure.
Keeping the event 'in house'
The Warden has told them that the campaigner is not to be interrupted in her work.
'Their will be no code red!'
She takes 8 weeks to get over her second ordeal.
But she does not report it.
There is something about ravenous bad-boys that talks to her evangelical soul.
They liked her.
All of them.
There was a connection.
Maybe she was getting through to them?
One had even said that his cock had been 'born again!'
Tegan is beautiful.
A Star.
To be exhibitionist enough to share her nature's gifts with the masses is fantastic.
She has a Master?
Well if so - a standing ovation to him for not keeping her exclusively to himself.
It's like a work of art buried in someone's cellar.
Nice to show some people around down there - so you can hear the oohs and ahs.
Sounds like objectification?
Well a little - but if I were a pretty girl - I'm sure I wouldn't care.
I'd enjoy causing sexual ruckus by my looks alone.
Its just one nice piece of life to play with if you can.
Updated idea about a human rights campaigner entering a hell hole prison.
The place is the Peri-Carribbean Island of Suiete Aloisius.
Recently turned democratic republic, the 'old ways' are still to be ironed out.
But there's no hurry, it seems.
The prison system is retro - or is it retri?
Retri-bution not Rehabilitation.
Bleeding Hearts International has flagged its interest.
Our girl is a young BHI 'front liner'.
A missionary.
She has taken a special interest in 'The Lowlife Prison',
Pestering the warden during her past 3 vacations.
Pushing the 'rights for prisoners' agenda.
Wanting to be given a tour so she can report on conditions and offer improvements.
Finally the warden agrees,
Frankly - he fancies the girl.
She has no jurisdiction; represents no official body,
She's a meddling private citizen in a foreign country.
The BHI are simply a bunch of college-based idealists.
The warden decides to set the student campaigner up.
A plan is hatched.
Willing guards will take on a role - pretending to be 'abused' prisoners.
The 5 or 7 are chained in the punishment cells/dungeon.
They are streaked with dirt and 'make-up' blood.
Hanging fully naked from cuffs and chains.
Looking abused and exhausted.
The girl is brought into this area.
A guard in a uniform is swinging a heavy whip menacingly.
She gasps at the sight,
Not just at the apparent recent beatings, but at the sweat covered physiques too.
Her heart skips a thousand beats.
Off and running she has taken the bait.
'Oh my god! This is terrible! You must stop this cruelty. I insist that you release these poor men right now!'
Surprisingly the warden appears contrite.
'You think so? Well I don't know. They have committed truly terrible crimes you know.'
'I don't care, they are human beings, worthy of compassion - no matter what their crimes.'
'Well..' The Warden says, ' If you think its better to let these serial rapists and murderers go...'
He hands her a key.
'Okay here's the master. You go and unlock their chains. Be my guest.'
The Warden's beeper goes off.
'Ooops...I must leave...emergency! I have to lock you in. Sorry. 'll leave you to tend their wounds and their souls'
He leaves the dungeon.
The girl releases the prisoners one by one from their wall shackles.
She soothes their suffering.
They play their role of exhausted victims until the final one is freed.
Then miraculously their exhaustion evapourates.
They proceed to thank their rescuer...thoroughly!
All you need is love,
Love is all you need.