Please stop using generic strip club-esque lines.

Have the girls write their own descriptions.

Kink live usually isn't just about getting them to do sexual/BDSM things.

Also, the descriptions are not the most appealing of messages.

Most of them are tautologies such as live or online.

I am aware that I am online that is how I am reading this.

I can make my own assesment of her looks, I don't need to be told how she looks.

I am more interested in the personality.

Tell me why this girl is better than the other models on line at the same time.

Why should I invest my time in her?

Why should I be her fan?

Make me see her as unique.

Make me fall in love with her.

If I just wanted my rocks off I would just jack off to the plethora of porn out there.